Creative Travel

I left myself along the way.
At a place I could not stay.
To slip and slide outside the past.
Succumbing to a spell I cast.

Breathing in a mystic air.
Looking round while I just stare.
Through windows into open doors.
Sailing ships to long lost shores.

While clocks keep ticking on the wall.
You travel in a timeless stall.
And you come back to realize.
A magic journey is the prize.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Squyres Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 12:04 PM
Sometimes those magical journeys within our imagination are a good place to escape. ... Thank you for your wonderful comments on my words... Your friend always... Debra
Horne Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 9:54 AM
yes, such truth in this deep one!
Thirtyseven Avatar
December 26, 2014 at 6:46 AM
A fantastic trip, journeying into all that's possible. Great work.
Williams Avatar
December 25, 2014 at 3:18 AM
Well done, I like it...
A   Avatar
December 24, 2014 at 7:21 PM
Hello, Creative Robert, the rhymer of all rhymers. Stopping by to say Hello, and Wish you a very Merry, Merry Christmas!!! May it bring you joy, happiness and everything else you deserve. Merry Christmas and a Happy New year! Forever ~LINDA~
Horne Avatar
December 13, 2014 at 4:32 PM
love this, my friend
Squyres Avatar
December 12, 2014 at 8:41 PM
Now that's a journey !! Excellent !!
Bauer Avatar
December 12, 2014 at 10:16 AM
this is wonderful, robert! i especially like the first verse. there are many ways to travel and the way you've described is one we can all access...
Fleming Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 2:46 PM
Very nice!! :) john.
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