Creations of the Light

Human minds muse the light
fire thoughts to the mind sky.
Fools flail for all their might
angry screams hide each cry.

To view the true sole source
take longs looks at the sun.
See earth's lasting first force
its rays can't be undone.

Dark dreams occur at night
while there's no sun up high.
Atoms fuse lumens bright
wise ones won't tell us why.

Myths are spun by the sages
unsure advice to try.
Faith filled tales through the ages
many truths to deny.

We all live with some fright
nature needs to be heard.
Hope that we do what's right
light shines the final word.



107 words  rhyme  6/2022 Pen illustration: G. Gaul
Quasi-Humanistic genesis theory of the cosmos
focusing on the sun's light energy.
Inspired by Gustav Dore, Salvador Dali illustrations
and the teachings of the Buddha.

godhopelightmythnaturerhyme

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