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Human minds muse the light fire thoughts to the mind sky. Fools flail for all their might angry screams hide each cry. To view the true sole source take longs looks at the sun. See earth's lasting first force its rays can't be undone. Dark dreams occur at night while there's no sun up high. Atoms fuse lumens bright wise ones won't tell us why. Myths are spun by the sages unsure advice to try. Faith filled tales through the ages many truths to deny. We all live with some fright nature needs to be heard. Hope that we do what's right light shines the final word. 107 words rhyme 6/2022 Pen illustration: G. Gaul Quasi-Humanistic genesis theory of the cosmos focusing on the sun's light energy. Inspired by Gustav Dore, Salvador Dali illustrations and the teachings of the Buddha.

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Date: 6/22/2022 8:15:00 PM
Thanks for sharing, Greg.
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Greg Gaul
Date: 6/23/2022 2:51:00 PM
Appreciate your visit and commentary

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