Creation's Beauty

sun shining like fire
lighting up the morning sky
is creations first beauty
that was beheld by the eye
a phnemonon that could only be marred
by a fleeting cloud floating at ease
leisurely drifting across the horizon
hanging in front with a shadowy tease
until a wind current blows
the puff of white flies
caught in it's under tows
leaving the sun shining bright
as it raises int the sky
with extreme height.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Chappell Avatar
October 10, 2010 at 12:26 PM
love this write samantha thank you [duncan]
Brown Avatar
September 16, 2010 at 9:57 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Samantha. Hope you have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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September 15, 2010 at 7:06 AM
Good morning, Samantha! Nice image, with a deep nature creation among the sun. Enjoyed,..p.d.
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