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Creation's Beauty

sun shining like fire lighting up the morning sky is creations first beauty that was beheld by the eye a phnemonon that could only be marred by a fleeting cloud floating at ease leisurely drifting across the horizon hanging in front with a shadowy tease until a wind current blows the puff of white flies caught in it's under tows leaving the sun shining bright as it raises int the sky with extreme height.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/10/2010 12:26:00 PM
love this write samantha thank you [duncan]
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Date: 9/16/2010 9:57:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Samantha. Hope you have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/15/2010 7:06:00 AM
Good morning, Samantha! Nice image, with a deep nature creation among the sun. Enjoyed,..p.d.
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