Rightly Jennings Poet Rhyme

Creations

you defy my imagination!
   and surpass all of my creations
 no loose change, we may have to walk it
 take our time, like we can afford it
    in my hour of early twilight
  you take me to a higher insight
        I am good, truly gone
      where to go and where from
	
   quiet stars falling through my blindness
  broken hearts would try to remind us
  troubles blow n’ rage in the distance
  they rise up n’ still make no difference
    one long, dizzy spell of confusion
     did seduce my every reason
  world outside comes down to
        push and shove, black and blue

  I can walk and talk at the same time
 one steady stream of thought on my mind
   well, I don’t know if you deserve this
  but you get all my love and service
    giving in was always too easy
     never did it appeal to me
  I left home for the front
        restless and bothersome

   in my hour of early twilight
 you take me to a higher insight
    I am good, truly gone
      where to go and where from



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