Creation

Creation

  A drunk old man's explanation
  of the beginning of creation:
  a thought became a universe
  beating with a wicked curse
  we made a God who made us
  to teach His splendid Opus
  we made a heaven and hell
  and sins to count and tell.
  We all transition to death
  rage against final breath.
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Greenhough Avatar
June 29, 2024 at 10:06 PM
A nice poem. We are all in the same boat. It seems. This poem is an interesting slant on eternity.
Nicholsen Avatar
May 24, 2024 at 9:44 AM
Awesome piece many blessings
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