Creation

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Written 10/12/2023
abab rhyme sequence
10 syllables each line
Line Gauthier sponsored
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the miracle of sound, gift of music, the lure of singing and depth of lyric, in single breath of vocals we admire, the marvel of creation in entire, look at the bird, river and sky above, in every fraction of life is God’s love!

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/10/2023 11:27:00 AM

I enjoyed your wonderful "creation" write. Good Luck... Have a blessed day..............

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 12/10/2023 12:06:00 PM

Dear Paula thank you! It is always lovely to hear from you! So pleased with your kind remarks!:)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/10/2023 8:17:00 AM

Life is indeed a miracle Krish and we should always be grateful for what we have. Hope you're keeping well. I'm recovering at home after spinal surgery, so far so good, I'm walking normally again. Tom

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 12/10/2023 8:33:00 AM

Dear Tom, Good to hear from you and happy to know you are getting better. Spine surgery is always a challenging operation and needs a good post surgery care and physio. Happy to help or talk if you drop me a personal message. Can talk to you even. Regards my friend. See you soon with your incredibly brilliant limericks!