Creation

Can one conceive of self before his dawn
Regain for fleeting second what he was
Eternal beings wandering thought or spawn
Atomic, cosmic, light, or primate fuzz
Toward what should we direct our praise?
Infinite evolution or omniscient play
Ornate description of the seven days 
Nocturnal seeds from amebic bays
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Callus Avatar
December 24, 2018 at 2:30 PM
I'm impressed by your first post @ Soup, Warren. You set our mind in motion...Regards // paul
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December 25, 2018 at 9:32 AM
Hi Paul, I'm glad that you liked it. Thanks for your positive comments and visit. All the best~ Warren
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August 22, 2018 at 1:18 AM
Wonderfully written and thought-provoking!
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August 23, 2018 at 8:24 AM
Thank you for your positive comments and visit, JW
Aquila Avatar
July 11, 2018 at 9:57 PM
Well written and open ended in thought. The reader will choose. i like it very much
Doll Avatar
July 12, 2018 at 8:34 AM
Barbara, you are very perceptive, Thanks for your positive comments
Lamoureux Avatar
June 29, 2018 at 7:03 AM
A belated welcome to the soup. A thought provoking first piece.
Doll Avatar
June 29, 2018 at 9:27 PM
Thank you for welcoming me to the soup and your positive comment
B. Avatar
April 10, 2018 at 11:10 AM
An amazing poem Warren!! I enjoyed reading..
Doll Avatar
April 10, 2018 at 11:44 AM
Thanks so much for your kind comment. I'm glad that you enjoyed it!
Ajmal Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 12:26 PM
It s nice written poem with a meaningful message, everything has a creator, similar is the case whith universe, once you start studying the concept of universe, it s full of surprises and such a vast thing can t come to existance all by itself plus everytjing is coordinated, water evaporates, become vapour,freezes, becomes cloud, then rain falls, crop grows, so surely there s a God,
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March 29, 2018 at 2:24 PM
I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Thank You!
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March 28, 2018 at 3:21 PM
A wonderful, thought provoking poem, so very well expressed Welcome to Poetry Soup !!!
Doll Avatar
March 28, 2018 at 4:15 PM
Thanks so much!!
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