Creation

Can one conceive of self before his dawn
Regain for fleeting second what he was
Eternal beings wandering thought or spawn
Atomic, cosmic, light, or primate fuzz
Toward what should we direct our praise?
Infinite evolution or omniscient play
Ornate description of the seven days 
Nocturnal seeds from amebic bays

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Paul Callus

Date: 12/24/2018 2:30:00 PM

I'm impressed by your first post @ Soup, Warren. You set our mind in motion...Regards // paul

Warren Doll
Date: 12/25/2018 9:32:00 AM

Hi Paul, I'm glad that you liked it. Thanks for your positive comments and visit. All the best~ Warren

J.W. Earnings

Date: 8/22/2018 1:18:00 AM

Wonderfully written and thought-provoking!

Warren Doll
Date: 8/23/2018 8:24:00 AM

Thank you for your positive comments and visit, JW

Barbara Aquila

Date: 7/11/2018 9:57:00 PM

Well written and open ended in thought. The reader will choose. i like it very much

Warren Doll
Date: 7/12/2018 8:34:00 AM

Barbara, you are very perceptive, Thanks for your positive comments

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/29/2018 7:03:00 AM

A belated welcome to the soup. A thought provoking first piece.

Warren Doll
Date: 6/29/2018 9:27:00 PM

Thank you for welcoming me to the soup and your positive comment

Robertina B.

Date: 4/10/2018 11:10:00 AM

An amazing poem Warren!! I enjoyed reading..

Warren Doll
Date: 4/10/2018 11:44:00 AM

Thanks so much for your kind comment. I'm glad that you enjoyed it!

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 3/29/2018 12:26:00 PM

It s nice written poem with a meaningful message, everything has a creator, similar is the case whith universe, once you start studying the concept of universe, it s full of surprises and such a vast thing can t come to existance all by itself plus everytjing is coordinated, water evaporates, become vapour,freezes, becomes cloud, then rain falls, crop grows, so surely there s a God,

Warren Doll
Date: 3/29/2018 2:24:00 PM

I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Thank You!