Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

Create Waves

Her essence succumbed 
to faded sadness
Uncertaining held deceit
Demons would drive 
her to maddness
Before she ever felt complete

Beguiled then trapped left 
alone and destitute 
Adrift in a mystifying way
Once so confident, her mind 
was absolute
Now her thoughts are in decay

Confused what happened 
what went wrong
Her world turn upside down
Now seemed life tasted of 
a bittersweet song
Needed saved so not to drown
She didn't want to make a splash 
All she only wanted was 
to create waves

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John Fleming December 21, 2019 at 10:00 AM I was fairly certain I had read this charming little poem once before? Apparently not. Its a little gem, Brenda! So glad I checked it out -- lovely rhyming -- fairly breezes along! Enjoyed very much. Warmest thoughts as always. :) john Brenda Chiri December 21, 2019 at 10:09 AM Thank you so very much John for all your support and lovely friendship!;)

Pace Ink-U-Script November 24, 2019 at 6:19 AM Love the way you expressed yourself in this one! It reminds me of when I’ve had days feeling like this. You couldn’t have expressed it better. Thanks for posting! INK Brenda Chiri November 24, 2019 at 7:13 AM Thank you so much G! And I love it when you comment!;) nice to see and appreciate ya!;)

Freddie Robinson Jr. November 19, 2019 at 9:20 AM I agree w/Natalyn ... this is goody goody poetry, Bre! Smartly written ... clever turn of the phrase at the end. Meesa like, Meesa like it a lot. Love and hugs always. Brenda Chiri November 23, 2019 at 12:56 PM Yousa like? Lol thank you Freddie I so appreciate your visits!;) hugs!

Ts Poetry November 17, 2019 at 9:44 AM The winter blues are setting in...you need to howl at the moon Brenda Chiri November 17, 2019 at 10:18 PM T guess I will be out doing just that tonight! Haha! I'll let ya know how it goes!;)

Regina Mcintosh November 17, 2019 at 5:55 AM I've been driven to madness in the past but no more... thankfully. God bless you sweet lady. Gina Brenda Chiri November 17, 2019 at 10:17 PM Lol yea Regina I feel you! A love can drive one insane at times!;)

Tom Cunningham November 17, 2019 at 5:37 AM Sounds like a bitter rejection that knocks your confidence Brenda. Hope all's well. Tom Brenda Chiri November 17, 2019 at 10:17 PM Well yes and no I guess! But thank you Tom for your kind words!;)

Caren Krutsinger November 17, 2019 at 5:13 AM "Demons would drive her to maddness Before she ever felt complete" - this is so true! Beautiful write, my friend. Brenda Chiri November 17, 2019 at 10:16 PM Ahh thanks my county friend! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!;)