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Create Waves

Her essence succumbed to faded sadness Uncertaining held deceit Demons would drive her to maddness Before she ever felt complete Beguiled then trapped left alone and destitute Adrift in a mystifying way Once so confident, her mind was absolute Now her thoughts are in decay Confused what happened what went wrong Her world turn upside down Now seemed life tasted of a bittersweet song Needed saved so not to drown She didn't want to make a splash All she only wanted was to create waves

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John Fleming

Date: 12/21/2019 10:00:00 AM

I was fairly certain I had read this charming little poem once before? Apparently not. Its a little gem, Brenda! So glad I checked it out -- lovely rhyming -- fairly breezes along! Enjoyed very much. Warmest thoughts as always. :) john

Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/21/2019 10:09:00 AM

Thank you so very much John for all your support and lovely friendship!;)

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 11/24/2019 6:19:00 AM

Love the way you expressed yourself in this one! It reminds me of when I’ve had days feeling like this. You couldn’t have expressed it better. Thanks for posting! INK

Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/24/2019 7:13:00 AM

Thank you so much G! And I love it when you comment!;) nice to see and appreciate ya!;)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/19/2019 9:20:00 AM

I agree w/Natalyn ... this is goody goody poetry, Bre! Smartly written ... clever turn of the phrase at the end. Meesa like, Meesa like it a lot. Love and hugs always.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/23/2019 12:56:00 PM

Yousa like? Lol thank you Freddie I so appreciate your visits!;) hugs!