Cream-Colored Sunrise

Turbulent clouds try
to obscure sunlight on bay
with vile furtiveness.  

Entered in Raul Moreno's contest,
" Vanilla Sky "
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 25, 2010 at 9:25 PM
Happy to see yours is among the winners- Congrats Andrew
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April 25, 2010 at 4:31 PM
Andrew, congratulations on your success in my contest...Raul
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April 25, 2010 at 8:51 AM
Good luck in the contest.
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April 25, 2010 at 3:07 AM
Great description- I almost said the same thing as the clouds were blocking the sun Smiles
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