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Cream Seeps From the Sun

Cream seeps from the sun
soaks dead eyelids with color...
Days lengthen to green.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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May 30, 2009 at 11:56 PM
Excellent Gerard one for my favourites.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.
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March 4, 2009 at 1:12 PM
I'm agree with Karen, good imagery. Good Haiku Gerard
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March 4, 2009 at 1:07 PM
PS--I hope you entered this in the contest. If you did, best wishes. Karen
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February 21, 2009 at 10:22 PM
Nice use of imagery in your haiku. I can't wait for spring--will enjoy that green you talk about. Keep on writing! Karen
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