Terry Hoffman Poet Rhyme

Cream Puffs

I just love a cream puff; 
that gooey custard fill
sets my mouth to drooling,
while waiting for that thrill.	

Crispy luscious pastry,
with chocolate on top,
starts my mind to dreaming 
of each delicious drop.

Then sometimes they make them
with real whipping cream.
That actu'lly is the best;
for hours I could dream.

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Jan Allison August 18, 2016 at 4:05 PM Just give me the cream one's I'll pass on the cold custard lol:-) hugs Jan xx Terry Hoffman September 2, 2016 at 6:13 AM I am with you, Jan. They are my favorites. Thanks for reading.

Tim Smith August 18, 2016 at 2:05 PM I'll take one too Terry....a fun write Terry Hoffman September 2, 2016 at 6:14 AM I really love them, in any for. Glad that you enjoyed it.