Crazy Pain

I'm crazy with pain Running around the house Looking for a corner That can cradle me Down on the floor again I spend all of my time on Hard surfaces Looking for a way to Mask my suffering Sitting on the countertop Crying on the bathroom Floor The bed is too soft To contain my torment Anymore soaked through with Tears and sagging Lonely years i can't Take much more How will i go on Without the person Who i was before

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Juli- Michelle

Date: 9/13/2012 9:13:00 PM

Beautiful and deep declaration of love :) like it alot

Juli- Michelle

Date: 9/13/2012 9:12:00 PM

I feel every inch of your poem. I have been here and still am in a sense. This write just spills your thoughts and actions into words so clearly, I feel like I'm you. That's a sign of a true writer. I love it, going into my favorites, thank you for sharing zaida, and a beautiful name <3

Zaida Ruiz
Date: 9/15/2012 12:58:00 PM

Thank you. It's bitter sweet because it's good to know that people experience things in similar ways and that we are not alone out here but it's sad to imagine that anyone else has experienced such anguish.