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3rd  in 8x8x8x8 Contest (Sponsor: Charles Messina)

Judged: March 25th, 2025

 

Crazy Neighbour

Next-door was unemendable
From a fall that incredible
all her grace was shredded cheddar
Covert charm's naked departure 
one human coil in porcine bliss 
soaking in her own unkind piss
phantom saucers for tea at noon
Prepare the room, tis Lady Loon
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Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 5, 2025 at 8:04 PM
Fabulous piece of poetry. Wild. Evocative. I love it. My best to you in the contest!
Layne Avatar
February 6, 2025 at 6:29 AM
Many thanks, Maureen.
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