Crazy Man

Crazy as you are horrifiC
Raving, ranting shooteR
Always carrying your berettA
Zigzag from bullets that whiZ
Yearning to cause tragedY
Monster fueled by deliriuM
Arise from paranoiA
Never to be seen agaiN
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Mac Donald Avatar
August 9, 2012 at 10:38 PM
A forceful acrostic verse, Jamie! Someone you'd "Never to be seen again". Nicely done! Best wishes, Mikki
Tsiluma Avatar
July 23, 2012 at 3:20 AM
Nicely done Jamie! It's interesting how you've spelt the words at the start and end of the lines -very nice! Definitely emphatic!
Andresen Avatar
July 22, 2012 at 3:09 PM
Nicely written Jamie.... - oxox Anne-Lise
Rua Avatar
August 9, 2012 at 10:42 PM
Thank you
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