Crazy In Love (Quick)

A love like this lasts longer than a day,
Above all, my heart screams the words "Will you stay?"
Years have gone by, emotions have grown stronger
A mere cry for help, cant be without you any longer.
Like white to a dove we go together, well sort of,
Like Eminem and Kim, we're just so crazy in love.
The light of your face burns a hole right through me,
I"ll never understand just what it is you do to me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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August 28, 2009 at 12:39 AM
if anyone has any ideas on how i can expand my style.. i am all ears. everything i write sounds the same to me. 2 bar rhymes.. any advice??
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August 26, 2009 at 8:02 PM
This is quite a piece.....keep it up -Jessica
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August 25, 2009 at 6:31 AM
Invisable, thank you for sharing your writing with us today. I truly enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol
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