Crazy Hazy Love

To Timothy Lee
Though mostly crazy high in zeal, It's trapped I am in love’s green field. My thinking cannot one thought yield. Such feeling spins a hazy wheel. Starlit favor may sparkle dreams, No promise offers neat sewed seams. Unsure, my heart beats quick appeal. No action vaguely clear at all, Holds me where I might blindly fall. This love grows lacy, shaky feel. Over cloud puffs, my caution spans To ponder love’s own thunder plans. I hope love’s truth is strong as steel. How frightened all my feelings spree While lost and tossed by all I see. Though mostly crazy high in zeal, Such feeling spins a hazy wheel. Unsure, my heart beats quick appeal. This love grows lacy, shaky feel. I hope love’s truth is strong as steel.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 12/2/2017 4:56:00 AM
Yes, mam...a Constanza it is...nicely penned CayCay...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 11/28/2017 11:18:00 PM
Here its said that love and the moth are blind. Such a fool was I. Opposites attract they also say. My how your poetry grew. I see another cup coming up
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Date: 11/28/2017 3:03:00 PM
CayCay, I am so happy you wrote a Constanza. You have expressed so wonderfully the trepidation that often accompanies love. Beautiful! : ) A Fave! Soup mail...
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Date: 11/26/2017 3:21:00 PM
Very beautifullly written, CayCay.
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Date: 11/26/2017 6:19:00 AM
The repeated lines add to the beauty of this poem--very rhythmic and well executed--best for a win, CayCay!
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Date: 11/25/2017 1:46:00 PM
CayCay, your first line is so amazing in setting the tone for your crazy haze of romantic feelings that pirouettes with lovely imagery through your wonderfully expressed poem. Beautifully done my friend! Hugs and best wishes for a win!!
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Date: 11/25/2017 12:26:00 PM
Very sweet. Well done, CayCay.
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Date: 11/25/2017 10:31:00 AM
Crazy love could turn out to be the ideal one, after all, CayCay! gl in the contest. Regards // paul
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Date: 11/25/2017 9:57:00 AM
I really enjoyed the imagery here, Caycay, and some of it nicely contrasted, such as lacy shaky!! You know better than anyone how love feels!! BTW, before I forget, my collaborator was Joseph Mays!
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Date: 11/25/2017 7:58:00 AM
Wow! CayCay this is an awesome Constanza. Good luck in the contest. You've nailed it.
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Date: 11/25/2017 1:24:00 AM
A very romantic write Caycay, much enjoyed!
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