Crazy Hazy Love

To Timothy Lee
Though mostly crazy high in zeal, It's trapped I am in love’s green field. My thinking cannot one thought yield. Such feeling spins a hazy wheel. Starlit favor may sparkle dreams, No promise offers neat sewed seams. Unsure, my heart beats quick appeal. No action vaguely clear at all, Holds me where I might blindly fall. This love grows lacy, shaky feel. Over cloud puffs, my caution spans To ponder love’s own thunder plans. I hope love’s truth is strong as steel. How frightened all my feelings spree While lost and tossed by all I see. Though mostly crazy high in zeal, Such feeling spins a hazy wheel. Unsure, my heart beats quick appeal. This love grows lacy, shaky feel. I hope love’s truth is strong as steel.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Warrior Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 4:56 AM
Yes, mam...a Constanza it is...nicely penned CayCay...god bless...^WW^
Breedt Avatar
November 28, 2017 at 11:18 PM
Here its said that love and the moth are blind. Such a fool was I. Opposites attract they also say. My how your poetry grew. I see another cup coming up
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 28, 2017 at 3:03 PM
CayCay, I am so happy you wrote a Constanza. You have expressed so wonderfully the trepidation that often accompanies love. Beautiful! : ) A Fave! Soup mail...
Tripp Avatar
November 26, 2017 at 3:21 PM
Very beautifullly written, CayCay.
Pandit Avatar
November 26, 2017 at 6:19 AM
The repeated lines add to the beauty of this poem--very rhythmic and well executed--best for a win, CayCay!
Ashley Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 1:46 PM
CayCay, your first line is so amazing in setting the tone for your crazy haze of romantic feelings that pirouettes with lovely imagery through your wonderfully expressed poem. Beautifully done my friend! Hugs and best wishes for a win!!
Gauthier Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 12:26 PM
Very sweet. Well done, CayCay.
Callus Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 10:31 AM
Crazy love could turn out to be the ideal one, after all, CayCay! gl in the contest. Regards // paul
Dietrich Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 9:57 AM
I really enjoyed the imagery here, Caycay, and some of it nicely contrasted, such as lacy shaky!! You know better than anyone how love feels!! BTW, before I forget, my collaborator was Joseph Mays!
Tripp Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 7:58 AM
Wow! CayCay this is an awesome Constanza. Good luck in the contest. You've nailed it.
Vaso Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 1:24 AM
A very romantic write Caycay, much enjoyed!
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