Bohari Mohammad Poet Rhyme

Crazy Friend

Slipping from my chin tears are running away
My best friend went apart from me, my heart beneath say
My eyes are tired of cry and it takes  a sleep
In the sadness of my friend, my heart in itself quit..!!!

I can't take proper rest now, my eyes only dreams of her
My whole life is getting spoil, my heart is totally curve
I wish I can see my best friend in my life again
But now a days I am broken, my heart beats with a pain..!!!

How I can lose my one..??? Only to her I love more
The word ‘LOVE' I made for her, not other or nor
I love you my friend..!!! Come back, please
Alas..!!! My soul will come out my life will take sleep..!!!

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Pandita Sietesantos October 11, 2014 at 12:08 PM WOW! What a sad, beautiful piece this is! Bohari, I love this exceptional piece that tugs at my heart! Bravo! Pandita

Stacey Brown August 9, 2014 at 1:44 PM a lost love can sure inspire a good writing as was done here, but as this pain fades and oh it will, a new love will inspire even more. may the trials of this life only cause you to grow stronger, love deeper and laugher harder my friend! Blessings, Stacey

Dave Timperley July 26, 2014 at 10:47 AM In life loving relationships come and go , like the tide. Pain dulls but memories stay. Lovely words from you Bohari. God Bless. Dave

June 21, 2014 at 8:14 AM Hello, I just made my account and read your poem first I was shocked and felt sad while reading your poems..It's really sad when you had a great friendship with someone and then a relationship just kills it all, I will be happy if you accept my friendship request

Anne-Lise Andresen June 21, 2014 at 7:31 AM - Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Bohari :) - I choose your first very well written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A June 20, 2014 at 12:49 PM Bohari,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Faye Gibson June 19, 2014 at 6:29 PM Welcome to Poetry Soup, Bohari. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. Enjoy!

Poet Destroyer A June 19, 2014 at 2:09 PM Bohari,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

James Hyler June 19, 2014 at 12:53 PM Thank you for sharing :)