CRAZY DREAM

written by :
 Owen Hamalala

My dreams are crazy and mysterious.
They appear while I am asleep (like A thief).
slips away when am awake. In my dreams, 
I am the kind of person I can never
   evolve to be.
A mindless roamer
In my dreams I”m like
spectator
I don’t realize its purpose in my life. 
It tends to pave a way  for me once in a while.

But I  places my fears in front 
as it takes me for a ride a roar costar.
I can’t figure out whether it’s helping me or hurting me.
In my dreams I have been pushed beyond walls
But yet in Progression
we keep moving to break more walls
I ask,

 are we in false paradise
A paradise were dreams become nightmares 
The breaking of sold ground
Like scattered pieces of broken Dreams
Yet to be forgotten like lost memories
They say with  dreams you go to places 
But with my dreams I went fast but not to far
We live a (world of dreams) of broken Promises
 As memories fad.
Into nothing but ashes 
My dreams are like the clouds that gather 
To  give rain but never rain
As I easily fade into nothing 
Like the smock rising h
My dreams
I n My dreams I whisper words of hope into the stars
To rewrite this crazy night mare{crazy dreams}
A pray to the man upstairs to send me the light to light  up this crazy dream of night mare

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 6/5/2024 5:39:00 AM
"in my dreams I whisper words of hope into the stars..." Awesome line Owen
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