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My friends and I had midnight hide and seek One had to stand by a tree and not peek In my state of hiding great I was hard to find My friends decided to just be unkind They all got together and decided to hunt me down I first hid in the river near my house and almost drown When they walk close by me I silently move through the grass It was very hard to see, but I crawled a long time and almost ran out of gas Then I heard one say that they were going up and wait by the tree I had an idea that made a way to make them see A shadow that ran in the distance thinking that would be I had my horse pull a little manikin to make them think it was me My friends took their flashlight and shined it toward it I thought I had them but one thing was clear they did not fall for it not a bit They all laugh and started to call out my name They all asked how the heck did you have time to pull that trick that was so lame I did not answer so they kept on looking for me, but I was so quick Some of my friends started to get really mad and tick I was a master of doing weird things they all knew what I can do The night was still young and the grass was collecting dew I decided to make a distraction once again To think of it, it would probably make the night end My friends finally surrounded my tree house I was quiet, so quiet, more than a mouse I had some rope in the tree house to make my escape To distract them I made a loud noise like an ape The tree that my tree house was in was at least forty feet up I had some stash in my tree house a drink or two in a cup My final hour is about to end I did not want my friends to catch me till I got to the tree I took the rope and tide it on a branch and pushed off and that was the key I landed on the garage roof and sneaked my way to the tree My friends knew me to well that they plan things before I could see They had a fish net ready for me to step into I thought that was kinda wise and some what like pew The few feet by the tree there was two of my friends that was ready Up in the tree they both jumped down and pulled me up in the net fast and steady They thought they had won, the person had to tag me before I touch tree She ended up having to get something to stand on to reach me I swung my weight back and forth till I ended up touching and the game ended My friends and I were so full of surprises and that is what the game handed

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Date: 5/9/2013 10:34:00 AM
Congrats on your win~A.O
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Date: 5/6/2013 8:27:00 PM
Very entertaining not so much crazy but a very good poem worthy of being read and appreciated.
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Date: 5/6/2013 8:25:00 PM
Reynaldo, I love the way you brought on the Crazy. Congratulations!!! :-) .....xox..... LINDA
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Date: 5/6/2013 7:56:00 PM
Reynaldo, CONGRATS <3 LUV ~*~SKAT
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Date: 4/13/2013 1:02:00 PM
.... a very pleasant story / poem you share Reynaldo, like it very much. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) :)
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Date: 4/13/2013 11:33:00 AM
ha it is crazy but i enjoyed and was entertained. Reynaldo, I enjoyed stopping by to read your poem. Take care and have yourself a nice day. xox~LINDA
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