Craving

Adam's ale the sugarplum agonizing for it*

07.10.16

*A placer in a contest
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Henderson Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 11:05 AM
I am digging it! Excellent one liner! Peace and many blessings to you Flower Moon.
Bocsa Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 10:07 AM
When Eve was craved, he suffered a bit.
A  Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 5:17 PM
moon, Congratulations on this awesome list of one line winners. Have a happy day **SKAT**
Dietrich Avatar
July 10, 2016 at 5:05 PM
GREAT title for this one as well, Moon Flower.
Onclaud Avatar
July 10, 2016 at 2:45 PM
ohh, i like the wit of this enjoyable write!.. shine on, moon!..huggs
Callus Avatar
July 10, 2016 at 12:31 PM
I like this one-liner, Moon Flower; what would we all do without water!! My garden plants are feeling the heat and need watering every day. ~ Regards // paul
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July 9, 2016 at 2:12 PM
- Great one, Moon Flower - Good luck in contest - I wish you a beautiful weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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