Craving

Adam's ale the sugarplum agonizing for it* 07.10.16 *A placer in a contest

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Steven Henderson

Date: 7/28/2016 11:05:00 AM

I am digging it! Excellent one liner! Peace and many blessings to you Flower Moon.

Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 7/27/2016 10:07:00 AM

When Eve was craved, he suffered a bit.

Skat A

Date: 7/17/2016 5:17:00 PM

moon, Congratulations on this awesome list of one line winners. Have a happy day **SKAT**

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/10/2016 5:05:00 PM

GREAT title for this one as well, Moon Flower.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/10/2016 2:45:00 PM

ohh, i like the wit of this enjoyable write!.. shine on, moon!..huggs

Paul Callus

Date: 7/10/2016 12:31:00 PM

I like this one-liner, Moon Flower; what would we all do without water!! My garden plants are feeling the heat and need watering every day. ~ Regards // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/9/2016 2:12:00 PM

- Great one, Moon Flower - Good luck in contest - I wish you a beautiful weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)