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Crashing Waves

the sky was carolina blue with the sun shining ever so brightly over the ocean the waves were crashing loudly as if they were angry with each other as far as you could see huge waves were making their way onto the shore their sound loud and distinct carrying throughout the air yet peaceful and calming way down in your soul as the cool clear water washes onto your feet Submitted for Catie Lindsey’s Contest “Fast and Fabulous”

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Date: 7/17/2010 9:48:00 AM
Hi Jerri-- this sure is an amazing write about the waves-- I could definitely picture them in my mind's eye crashing into each other -- love how you depicted the sky too-- wish I was on a beach right now...wish you the best in the contest! -- nikko :)
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Date: 7/17/2010 8:58:00 AM
Loved the imagery, could feel the waves
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