Crashing Darkness

Crashing darkness, can't see,
Since you tore free,
No longing loving me.

I feel the weight of no light,
Crashing darkness tonight,
No sunrise in sight.

Crashing darkness of despair,
For you no longer care,
Stripping my heart bare.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
August 8, 2018 at 9:12 PM
I feel the hurt, Timothy. Well penned.
Mcguire Avatar
August 9, 2018 at 12:25 AM
Thank you.
Gentry Avatar
August 7, 2018 at 4:43 AM
Sad poem, well-written. Can practically feel the raw emotions. Well done. :)
Mcguire Avatar
August 7, 2018 at 12:09 PM
Thank you Susan
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