Crashed Love

Teardrops slipping, sliding, falling unceremoniously 
Bruised and battered, this broken hearted agony. 
Memories arise of the times gone before 
When being in love with you held promises of something more. 

Silently my world comes crashing again 
Leaving a twisting, turning, searing pain. 
Little did I imagine it would have turned out like this 
A sudden end to all our Dreams of bliss... 

Confused…. 

I don’t understand these words
That are said they pass through me  
Right through my head 

Sometimes I wish that it all would end 
Just get it over I would just go around that bend 

I’m not depressed 
I’m just ready to give up 
My life has been filled 
Just like my cup 

Oh well 
Life just keeps coming 
And people lying…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Montgomery Avatar
December 15, 2008 at 8:58 AM
I luv it... its really good!!! How old are you? I'm 14 lol....
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November 14, 2008 at 6:36 AM
You're a human being, Alexz. You deserve no less than the happiness and joy that others have. Believe in yourself. It may be difficult at first but you need to take the first steps. Independence is important. Your feelings get hurt too easily. God Bless. Vince
Yeager Avatar
November 14, 2008 at 6:12 AM
Im 15 as well its kewl to meet someone my age on here...i'd love to be firends =]] your a realy good poet btw
Yeager Avatar
November 12, 2008 at 6:27 AM
Awsomeness poem alexz truely loved it this is one of my fav poems now its so moving and reminds me of what a broken heart can do to a person. Keep Wrighting....Joanie
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