Dinda Minardi Poet Rhyme

Crashed By An Angel

(30/09/2011)

Logic isn’t that important
I’m right! -As a proved defendant-
From jails occupant to humanity servant 

After days I had absorbed black steam of others’ fleshes
I got crashed by an angel, then refreshed
Certainly been in a wrong track
But God allowed me to weave my life back

All could change your way to many of pathways
But only one person grace, 
Whose face been waiting to gaze
And whose love you’ve been dreaming to embrace
To guide you back to truth from crazy craze

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Elizabeth Wesley October 6, 2011 at 3:07 PM Brilliant observation about life weaving back. How true till the unravelling! Nice work Dinda, you gave it soul.

Black Eyed Susan October 2, 2011 at 7:16 PM you absorbed black steam? that sounds absolutely wretched. thank goodness for that angel!

Michael J. Falotico September 30, 2011 at 7:29 PM Amazing write my Poet Partner... Life is a constant climb and journey... well written piece...love Michael

Carol Sunshine Brown September 30, 2011 at 1:51 PM I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Dinda. I wish you a most enjoyable weekend with lots of sunshine and happy thoughts. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 30, 2011 at 12:15 PM awesome lines of great inspiration Dinda. especially that second stanza.. God gives many chances for us to 'get right' and when we do ..poems like this one emerge luv.. great..great.. luv it..