Crash Over Me

in the galaxy
if you where a beautiful sound
in the universe that surrounds me,
seeing the stars explode as you crash over me!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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October 4, 2010 at 10:41 AM
From what I am reading this morning it looks as if everyone found some inspiration to write this weekend. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us today Joanie. Love, Carol
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October 3, 2010 at 1:42 PM
Nice creative and interesting write on crash over me, Joanie
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