Crash Fusing

Lonesome time of isolation,
caged in self-confined crumbled space.
Stretched arms, silk cheeks withdrawn
to distance redefined,
feel of live touch lost in deep gloom.
Wish I could crash on you to fuse.

May 26, 2020
Theme chosen : Crash
Syllable count : 8/8/6/6/8/8
Checked on howmanysyllables.com
Contest : Hexastich It
Sponsor : Nette Onclaud
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Allison Avatar
May 30, 2020 at 12:46 PM
very poignant for out current situation, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Onclaud Avatar
May 30, 2020 at 11:49 AM
it's that sense of longing that makes this poem superb,subimal...congrats on your win in my contest...huggs!
Mishra Avatar
May 30, 2020 at 11:44 AM
Beautiful soothing imagery. Congratulations on your win Subimal :)
Somadas Avatar
May 29, 2020 at 11:49 PM
Congrats Subimal for that wonderful win..
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