Crappy Mother's Day Minichu

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Son said he’d cook a meal Relax mum, chill out and take the weight off your feet It’s a deal! I smell burning I leap out of my comfy seat Churning Meal burned Mother’s day treat Spurned Son said he’d cook a meal I leap out of my comfy seat Spurned FICTIONAL POEM FOR CONTEST 6,12,3 ;4,8,2; 2,4,1; 6,8,1 Checked with how many syllables Let's Minichu on fun Poetry Contest Sponsored by Mohan Chutani 03/18/21

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/6/2022 8:53:00 AM

It could have been a daughter just as likely!

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 3/28/2022 7:31:00 AM

This a funny one, Jan: His fictional heart was in the right place Cheers, SuZ

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 3/22/2022 6:10:00 PM

Fine penning Jan, the boy's intentions were good! Hope all's well with you , take care, Gordon

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/21/2022 12:12:00 AM

Shame and he so wanted to impress his Mom, but he upsets her instead, his heart was in the right place, good one Jan. Forgive him maybe this time and tell him to practice for the next Mother's day! a very enjoyable read my friend, hope you are well. Hugs, blessings, Jennifer.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/22/2022 3:56:00 PM

Pure fiction of course lol, we celebrate Mother's day on 27th March I already have flowers a few weeks ago from my son, we dont go for the rip off inflated prices on the day!

Eve Roper

Date: 3/20/2022 5:49:00 PM

Awesome write, Jan. Sounds like one of my Easter dinner meals of prime rib roast. I totally burned it..true story. Good luck friend. Thank you for the wonderful compliment.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/22/2022 3:55:00 PM

oh gosh Eve I bet that was one meal you will never forget:-) xx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/19/2022 8:36:00 PM

Aw, Mom. A little mercy, please. He's a male, after all. Lower those expectations! lol... Nice work, Jan! Pleasure to see your Muse return. :) Gershon

Jan Allison
Date: 3/20/2022 4:14:00 PM

wish she was back for good GW but I am trying to be more active xx