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Crappy Mother's Day Minichu

Son said he’d cook a meal
Relax mum, chill out and take the weight off your feet
It’s a deal!

I smell burning
I leap out of my comfy seat
Churning

Meal burned
Mother’s day treat
Spurned

Son said he’d cook a meal
I leap out of my comfy seat
Spurned

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6,12,3 ;4,8,2; 2,4,1; 6,8,1
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03/18/21

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Caren Krutsinger April 6, 2022 at 8:53 AM It could have been a daughter just as likely!

Suzanne Delaney March 28, 2022 at 7:31 AM This a funny one, Jan: His fictional heart was in the right place Cheers, SuZ

Gordon Mcconnell March 22, 2022 at 6:10 PM Fine penning Jan, the boy's intentions were good! Hope all's well with you , take care, Gordon

Jennifer Proxenos March 21, 2022 at 12:12 AM Shame and he so wanted to impress his Mom, but he upsets her instead, his heart was in the right place, good one Jan. Forgive him maybe this time and tell him to practice for the next Mother's day! a very enjoyable read my friend, hope you are well. Hugs, blessings, Jennifer. Jan Allison March 22, 2022 at 3:56 PM Pure fiction of course lol, we celebrate Mother's day on 27th March I already have flowers a few weeks ago from my son, we dont go for the rip off inflated prices on the day!

Eve Roper March 20, 2022 at 5:49 PM Awesome write, Jan. Sounds like one of my Easter dinner meals of prime rib roast. I totally burned it..true story. Good luck friend. Thank you for the wonderful compliment. Jan Allison March 22, 2022 at 3:55 PM oh gosh Eve I bet that was one meal you will never forget:-) xx

Gershon Wolf March 19, 2022 at 8:36 PM Aw, Mom. A little mercy, please. He's a male, after all. Lower those expectations! lol... Nice work, Jan! Pleasure to see your Muse return. :) Gershon Jan Allison March 20, 2022 at 4:14 PM wish she was back for good GW but I am trying to be more active xx

Andrea Dietrich March 19, 2022 at 3:33 PM you did GREAT with this minichu, jan. by the way, Jack Horne wrote a really cool tribute to you. Go see. Jan Allison March 20, 2022 at 4:14 PM oh thanks Andrea I must piop by xx

Mike Gentile March 19, 2022 at 12:43 PM But how about 'A" for effort!! cute one Jan, Happy Saturday XXOO Jan Allison March 20, 2022 at 4:13 PM Pure fiction lol, I will cook steaks next Sunday xx

Rico Leffanta March 19, 2022 at 10:55 AM and quite naturally left the mess for mum to clean up , . . .Thanks for the laugh! Aloha! Jan Allison March 20, 2022 at 4:13 PM its mothers day next week - I will cook lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Jack Horne March 19, 2022 at 9:37 AM ha ha ha, glad to see it was fictional Jan Allison March 20, 2022 at 4:13 PM thanks Jack xx

Jeff Kyser March 18, 2022 at 2:25 PM This is terrific, Jan. That's a fun form, that minichu! Jeff Kyser March 18, 2022 at 5:18 PM LOL, my Imagism diaper blowout poem was apparently not well received :-) Jan Allison March 18, 2022 at 2:36 PM I hope Mohan finds the humour, I am, thankful its fictional lol:-) hugs Jan xx