Craggy Wall

To dig for life’s blood to flourish from seed
Roots are driven deep and cling to life in need,
Burst through in glory where none can survive
The drywall a challenge a world don’t deprive,

A drop of moisture from lips so sweet
Can life surge as root and moisture meet?

You the one to give the love
I flower my seed carried up above,
The craggy wall no more lay stark
My flower engaged within your heart.
To dig for life’s blood to flourish from seed
Roots are driven deep and cling to life in need

entered Craig Cornish
flower in the crannied wall contest
8/3/2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 12/16/2021 3:20:00 PM
Not being a Gardner and being coloured blind I probably didn’t get the whole experience. I did enjoy the insight from Joe.
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Date: 11/11/2021 3:39:00 PM
I dig it Mandy.' And I know the blood euphemism Is just about red flowers, and it's bound to grow On others I reckon..' All the best!
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Date: 6/15/2021 2:59:00 PM
Another beauty I had missed among your poems, mandy. A poem most profound.
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 6/15/2021 10:24:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea, I wish I could get the urge back to write again. xx
Date: 5/25/2020 12:07:00 AM
Yes love this, so deep, beyond the contest understanding, no doubt.
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 6/15/2021 10:24:00 PM
inspired by someone I know xx
Date: 3/8/2020 5:13:00 PM
wow, mandy! it's been ages since i've seen a poem of yours here. welcome back! i wish you the best of luck in the contest with this beautiful piece...
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 3/9/2020 11:35:00 AM
Aw thanks, Ilene, so lovely of you to comment xx
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