Cradled In My Arc

KATAUTA:

Her:        eyes brown, like choc’late,
              swooning like the stars unglued —
              yours mad as the moon

Him:        pistachio eyes —
               the gaze of a soulful cat
               sea swept in zephyr

Her:         swallowed by the pond —
               our shadow imitates moves
               of tender years

Him:        silk like a spotlight,
               the moon pouring forth its milk —
               you invite my thirst

Her:          sway of tropical
                palms, your cradled in my arc —
                hammock’s impression

Him:         blow kiss from purple
                lips, the pitons like your breasts
                and the valley split

Together:  laughing and weeping
                present immortality —
                generosity christened


12/14/2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 12/17/2020 7:10:00 AM
Together they are a magical mystical force. I feel I know them.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/17/2020 10:52:00 AM
My hubbie with the choc’late eyes, me pistachio. We are bowing...not mooning ;)
Date: 12/15/2020 8:00:00 AM
Thoroughly enjoyed! The first is my favourite. xomo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/17/2020 10:51:00 AM
Thank yo! I am in a ho ho ho mood....perhaps because I am on vacation! Hear me roar! <3 Kim
Date: 12/15/2020 4:38:00 AM
Delightful exchange in this hard to execute haiku form. Kudos, Kim--so well done.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/16/2020 4:37:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay!
Date: 12/15/2020 3:14:00 AM
Marvellous dialogue with some wonderful haiku. You did well. ~~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/15/2020 3:32:00 AM
Thank you, my sweet friend!
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