Kim Rodrigues Poet Haiku

Cradled In My Arc

KATAUTA:

Her:        eyes brown, like choc’late,
              swooning like the stars unglued —
              yours mad as the moon

Him:        pistachio eyes —
               the gaze of a soulful cat
               sea swept in zephyr

Her:         swallowed by the pond —
               our shadow imitates moves
               of tender years

Him:        silk like a spotlight,
               the moon pouring forth its milk —
               you invite my thirst

Her:          sway of tropical
                palms, your cradled in my arc —
                hammock’s impression

Him:         blow kiss from purple
                lips, the pitons like your breasts
                and the valley split

Together:  laughing and weeping
                present immortality —
                generosity christened


12/14/2020

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Caren Krutsinger December 17, 2020 at 7:10 AM Together they are a magical mystical force. I feel I know them. Kim Rodrigues December 17, 2020 at 10:52 AM My hubbie with the choc’late eyes, me pistachio. We are bowing...not mooning ;)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart December 15, 2020 at 8:00 AM Thoroughly enjoyed! The first is my favourite. xomo Kim Rodrigues December 17, 2020 at 10:51 AM Thank yo! I am in a ho ho ho mood....perhaps because I am on vacation! Hear me roar! <3 Kim

Vijay Pandit December 15, 2020 at 4:38 AM Delightful exchange in this hard to execute haiku form. Kudos, Kim--so well done. Kim Rodrigues December 16, 2020 at 4:37 AM Thank you, Vijay!

Victor Buhagiar December 15, 2020 at 3:14 AM Marvellous dialogue with some wonderful haiku. You did well. ~~ Kim Rodrigues December 15, 2020 at 3:32 AM Thank you, my sweet friend!