Cracks In the Facade

Opposing forces center on the beam
Of its own tailspin flowing
As gravity prevails

As the rose's petals fall loosely down
Playing with the wind's coat tails
Its senseless beauty tells

How does science and beauty be engaged?
Only eyes that see its sway
Gains the truth of knowing



November 13, 2019
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Na Avatar
December 8, 2019 at 7:32 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Lonna
One Avatar
November 17, 2019 at 6:17 AM
you have a great way with words.. this is brilliant and should do very well in the contest...
Blodgett Avatar
November 17, 2019 at 7:03 PM
I am so honored by your comments!! You are a master kind Silent One. Thank you. Lonna
Na Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 11:30 PM
well done Lonna . you got a good chance on this one. Gl in contest. Thanks for sharing
Blodgett Avatar
November 16, 2019 at 9:20 PM
Thank you again Gregory. Lonna
Gauthier Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 11:01 PM
Lovely poem, Lonna.
Blodgett Avatar
November 16, 2019 at 9:20 PM
Thanks Line. Lonna
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