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Opposing forces center on the beam Of its own tailspin flowing As gravity prevails As the rose's petals fall loosely down Playing with the wind's coat tails Its senseless beauty tells How does science and beauty be engaged? Only eyes that see its sway Gains the truth of knowing November 13, 2019 Pick A Title, Vol. 11 - Kimo(3 Stanzas) - Poetry Contest Sponsored by Edward Ibeh

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Date: 12/8/2019 7:32:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Lonna
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Date: 11/17/2019 6:17:00 AM
you have a great way with words.. this is brilliant and should do very well in the contest...
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 11/17/2019 7:03:00 PM
I am so honored by your comments!! You are a master kind Silent One. Thank you. Lonna
Date: 11/13/2019 11:30:00 PM
well done Lonna . you got a good chance on this one. Gl in contest. Thanks for sharing
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 11/16/2019 9:20:00 PM
Thank you again Gregory. Lonna
Date: 11/13/2019 11:01:00 PM
Lovely poem, Lonna.
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 11/16/2019 9:20:00 PM
Thanks Line. Lonna

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