Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Kimo

Notes About The Poem

- Cracks In the Facade -

chaos elements of normality
insects buzzing in lamp dome
reveals alluring mouths

he breathes out a photographic desire
the contact lenses pops out
caught in pink mesh stockings

black curls colored bluish by the sunlight
like the children's drawn doodles
no shiny surfaces

                           




12/11/2019
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Pick A Title, Vol 11 - Kimo
Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh
10-7-6 howmanysyllables.com
3rd place in the contest

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Na Na December 8, 2019 at 7:42 PM Congrats on your winning poem Anne-Lise Anne-Lise Andresen December 9, 2019 at 12:19 PM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Greg :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands December 8, 2019 at 6:58 PM Congratulations for your win Anne-Lise :) Anne-Lise Andresen December 9, 2019 at 12:19 PM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anisha Dutta November 25, 2019 at 11:19 PM Nicely Penned. All the best. Anne-Lise Andresen November 26, 2019 at 1:44 PM - Thank you very much, Anisha :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gordon Mcconnell November 14, 2019 at 9:10 AM Nice interesting piece Anne-Lise, quite deep in parts though but fine penning! Anne-Lise Andresen November 16, 2019 at 1:22 PM - Many thanks for your kind visit and your comment, Gordon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams November 13, 2019 at 8:16 PM what a brilliant write my friend, that photo works well with your words, made it more powerful.... best wishes in the contest... hugs :) Anne-Lise Andresen November 16, 2019 at 1:21 PM - Many thanks for your kind visit and your comment, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Brenda Chiri November 13, 2019 at 1:36 PM Loved this!;) Anne-Lise Andresen November 13, 2019 at 1:41 PM - I'm glad, thank you very much Brenda - So few people comment on this ... I thought it might be "too deep" - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Frederic Parker November 12, 2019 at 6:15 PM Very deep dear poet, after reading I felt like stabbing the throat of anguish with a dull knife... Anne-Lise Andresen November 13, 2019 at 8:08 AM - Sounds awful ... Frederic - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos November 12, 2019 at 12:25 PM Sunshine Smile what an intense talented write - I loved every word you penned. Good luck in the contest. Hugs and blessings, Jenny. Anne-Lise Andresen November 12, 2019 at 12:53 PM - Thank you very much, Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper November 12, 2019 at 11:29 AM Interesting photo, nicely written write to accompany the photo. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Anne-Lise Andresen November 12, 2019 at 12:53 PM - Thank you very much, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior November 12, 2019 at 8:57 AM Love the pic and love the poem, Anne-Lise...poetic (((hugs))) coming your way...^WW^ :o) Anne-Lise Andresen November 12, 2019 at 12:53 PM - Thank you very much, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux November 12, 2019 at 8:43 AM Cool poem and photo. Hugs Rick. Anne-Lise Andresen November 12, 2019 at 12:52 PM - Thank you very much, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green November 12, 2019 at 8:10 AM The poem was so cool and that image is so creepy. Nicely done my friend. Best wishes in the contest Anne-Lise Andresen November 12, 2019 at 12:52 PM - Thank you very much, Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)