Cracks In the Facade

Bright ,cheerful,jovial is his visage
You sense a fragile sadness
Belied by his soft smile

In  quieter mood his face relaxes
Worry lines fragment his calm
Tears threaten like raindrops

The pent up  dam now  bursts,his bulwark gone
Broken,beaten and bereft
A sad shell of a man
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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De Beaulieu Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 12:13 PM
Hello Denis Bruce, he is a sad shell for a man. enjoy your day my friend.
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October 12, 2020 at 9:43 AM
Hello Denis Bruce, if you need encouragement. I am here for you. yes I am positive to. Yes whoever is with me is in a good place. Today is Canada's Thanksgiving. Enjoy your day my friend.
Bruce Avatar
October 12, 2020 at 2:28 AM
Whoever is with you, is always in a good place
Bruce Avatar
October 12, 2020 at 2:25 AM
thank you,my Darlene, for always being so positive and encouraging
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