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Cracks In the Facade

Bright ,cheerful,jovial is his visage You sense a fragile sadness Belied by his soft smile In quieter mood his face relaxes Worry lines fragment his calm Tears threaten like raindrops The pent up dam now bursts,his bulwark gone Broken,beaten and bereft A sad shell of a man

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Date: 10/11/2020 12:13:00 PM
Hello Denis Bruce, he is a sad shell for a man. enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/12/2020 9:43:00 AM
Hello Denis Bruce, if you need encouragement. I am here for you. yes I am positive to. Yes whoever is with me is in a good place. Today is Canada's Thanksgiving. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Denis Bruce
Date: 10/12/2020 2:28:00 AM
Whoever is with you, is always in a good place
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Denis Bruce
Date: 10/12/2020 2:25:00 AM
thank you,my Darlene, for always being so positive and encouraging

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