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Cracks In the Facade

I first saw her face framed by Spanish moss Beneath the oaks of Georgia - Beauty beyond compare Her golden hair crowned the deepest blue eyes That stared beyond my presence - Her lips frozen and cold Fascinated I continued to stare Her eyes at last met mine and Her lips began to smile 11-6-19 Contest : Pick A Title, Vol 11, Kimo Sponsor : Edward Ibeh

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Date: 12/8/2019 7:38:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Larry
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Date: 11/6/2019 10:52:00 PM
Very nice to see this smile at the end of this poem. Well done :)
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 11/7/2019 12:46:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi.....the crack in the facade

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