Cracks In the Cradle

Judgement is crossing
the bridge of Sighs,
some can be quite fatal.

Stars march in line 
across a cold crimson sky
casting light on cracks in the cradle.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Chircop Avatar
October 25, 2015 at 4:22 PM
Thinking...This poem makes me think about - To judge..Or to forgive..Guess it depends on how much we love.
Godwin Avatar
October 20, 2015 at 8:31 PM
Very beautiful. I read it several times and each time it gave me more and more ... CayCay
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October 12, 2015 at 11:29 AM
this is deep, SKAT
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October 13, 2015 at 10:31 AM
...a free shovel with every poem!
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