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Crack That You Sniff

Crack That You Sniff By Valerie Odom May 22, 2017 Once your gone youre gone That means youre dead for real Its like the healings going backwards Man im tryna heal I cant take all this suffering I cant take this pain But when the trigger goes off Itll be sent through my brain I gotta hire some goons Cause i cant do it myself Day by day i try to fix it But its hurting my health Maybe if you send me away ill get fixed But my mind is taking over like the crack that you sniff

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Date: 7/20/2017 11:43:00 AM
Valerie, fighting the "inner mind" and the self control are extremely hard on anybody. Giving up is not the answer, the wrong people are steering you away from reality. Walk away from the negatives. God Bless
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Date: 6/7/2017 2:06:00 AM
Poignant, and powerful, and yes painful. I hope this is only a poem, but if it's not I'm sending hugs your way.
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