Valerie Odom Poet Rhyme

Crack That You Sniff

Crack That You Sniff 
By Valerie Odom
May 22, 2017

Once your gone youre gone
That means youre dead for real
Its like the healings going backwards
Man im tryna heal
I cant take all this suffering 
I cant take this pain
But when the trigger goes off
Itll be sent through my brain
I gotta hire some goons 
Cause i cant do it myself
Day by day i try to fix it
But its hurting my health
Maybe if you send me away ill get fixed
But my mind is taking over like the crack that you sniff

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Pete Yuhas July 20, 2017 at 11:43 AM Valerie, fighting the "inner mind" and the self control are extremely hard on anybody. Giving up is not the answer, the wrong people are steering you away from reality. Walk away from the negatives. God Bless

Darren White June 7, 2017 at 2:06 AM Poignant, and powerful, and yes painful. I hope this is only a poem, but if it's not I'm sending hugs your way.