Patri Venkata Ramana Poet Haiku

Cozy Winter Holiday

down pour of white beads

                                   earth enveloped in snow pouch

                                          hot espresso steams






Fall or Winter Holiday Haiku Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin 
Date: 18-11-2021

PLACE : 2nd

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Sam Kauffman December 1, 2021 at 10:43 AM Congratulations Patri. I love the contrast of hot to cold - chills to cozy warmth. Blessings to you. Patri Venkata Ramana December 1, 2021 at 1:40 PM Thanks a lot for your compliments.

Paulette Calasibetta November 30, 2021 at 2:45 PM Congratulations on your win in Tania's contest. Lovey your imagery! Blessings, Paulette Patri Venkata Ramana December 1, 2021 at 6:24 AM Thank you so much for the compliments.

Eve Roper November 29, 2021 at 6:48 PM Patri, lovely imagery. Congratulations on your win in Tania's contest. Hugs Eve Patri Venkata Ramana December 1, 2021 at 6:23 AM Thank you so much for the compliments.

Sara Kendrick November 29, 2021 at 3:24 AM I have read your winning work and was delighted that it was in the winners' list. Congrats. Sara Patri Venkata Ramana December 1, 2021 at 6:25 AM Very glad for your compliments. Thank you so much.

Andrea Dietrich November 28, 2021 at 6:43 PM wonderful contrast!! Congrats Patri Venkata Ramana November 28, 2021 at 11:15 PM Thank you so much.

Kim Rodrigues November 27, 2021 at 5:50 AM Beautiful, Patri! Congratulations! Patri Venkata Ramana November 27, 2021 at 7:14 PM Thanks a lot for the compliments.

Jan Allison November 26, 2021 at 5:02 PM wonderful imagery, many congrats on your win Patri:-) hugs Jan xx Patri Venkata Ramana November 27, 2021 at 7:14 PM very glad for your compliments. Thanks a lot.

Tania Kitchin November 26, 2021 at 12:16 PM Patri, a creative haiku, congratulations on your winning placement! Patri Venkata Ramana November 27, 2021 at 7:13 PM Thank you so much for appreciating my lines.