Cozy (Haiku)

Sea lion's nestling,
atop the rocky summit;
awaiting its mate
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Degenhardt Avatar
August 26, 2008 at 5:16 AM
I can see it there now, just waiting, being ever devoted. This is so clear and flows so well while staying well to the form. Excellent write. Michael
Buys Avatar
August 22, 2008 at 4:18 PM
A vivid image capturing the lonesome beauty very well. Good one. Love Heidie
Richards Avatar
August 21, 2008 at 6:16 AM
We took a trip to the Oregon coast this summer, and maybe saw this very thing!! Sweet poem!.....Sincerely, Carrie
Winter Avatar
August 21, 2008 at 5:47 AM
They are indeed awesome creatures. A clear vision of them from your haiku. Love, Shar
Foulk Avatar
August 20, 2008 at 4:34 PM
Sea lion's are amazing creatures. lovely piece you wrote.
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