Covered Thoughts

The night creeps over

                          the distant trees and steals all

                                                                 that I had today...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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December 10, 2012 at 9:07 PM
you are very good at haiku... good imagery.. xox~pd
Docherty Avatar
September 15, 2010 at 11:31 PM
A perfect haiku pictured moment vanishing, but with it dawns new promise, hope and inspiration. Great piece of penning, well done! kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.
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September 13, 2010 at 10:58 AM
Very nice haiku, Michael! I like the image of night stealing all the things you saw in the daylight. Very creative! Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
September 12, 2010 at 6:03 PM
Nice creative haiku with fine images to express your thought, Michael
Wilson Avatar
September 12, 2010 at 12:43 PM
Beautiful haiku Michael.. I really liked it..Take care~Deb
Roberts Avatar
September 12, 2010 at 8:24 AM
love it
Shetley Avatar
September 12, 2010 at 8:14 AM
wonderful haiku, the passing of time seems so unfair, our moments left to memory. Yet, it leaves us something to look forward to... lovely write.
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September 12, 2010 at 7:27 AM
Wow Michael... what great visual here in your words.. an awesome picture painted my friend ..so lovely.. enjoyed this happy football Sunday... football fever will take over my home in a few hours luv.. enjoy... with luv..always...
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