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Covered Thoughts

The night creeps over the distant trees and steals all that I had today...

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/10/2012 9:07:00 PM

you are very good at haiku... good imagery.. xox~pd

Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 9/15/2010 11:31:00 PM

A perfect haiku pictured moment vanishing, but with it dawns new promise, hope and inspiration. Great piece of penning, well done! kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/13/2010 10:58:00 AM

Very nice haiku, Michael! I like the image of night stealing all the things you saw in the daylight. Very creative! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/12/2010 6:03:00 PM

Nice creative haiku with fine images to express your thought, Michael

Deb Wilson

Date: 9/12/2010 12:43:00 PM

Beautiful haiku Michael.. I really liked it..Take care~Deb

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/12/2010 8:24:00 AM

love it

Thvia Shetley

Date: 9/12/2010 8:14:00 AM

wonderful haiku, the passing of time seems so unfair, our moments left to memory. Yet, it leaves us something to look forward to... lovely write.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/12/2010 7:27:00 AM

Wow Michael... what great visual here in your words.. an awesome picture painted my friend ..so lovely.. enjoyed this happy football Sunday... football fever will take over my home in a few hours luv.. enjoy... with luv..always...