Courage

C  an you imagine the courage it took,
O nce I decided to remain with that crook?
U tterly devoid of love and care.
R egretting my life with you I swear.
A ll focus instead on our beautiful daughters.
G etting them to adulthood was all that mattered. 
E normous rewards, my life far from tatters.

10/12/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Roper Avatar
December 21, 2016 at 7:02 PM
Congratulations on your poem “Courage” winning, Jean :) know the feeling at one time... Happy now Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays Hugs Eve
Murray Avatar
December 22, 2016 at 1:17 AM
I'm happy now too Eve. A lot of my poems revisit that time of my life. I just get the prompts at contest time. I find writing them now helps me heal even more. Thank you for your good wishes.
Y. Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 4:33 PM
Hi Jean, You've penned such a good acrostic. Congratulations on your winning: -) Alexis
Murray Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 5:39 PM
Thank you Alexis. Merry Xmas.
Martin Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 3:59 PM
Great acrostic! Congrats on your win Jean! :-)
Murray Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 4:22 PM
Thank you Mark.
Flats Avatar
December 12, 2016 at 12:03 PM
I bow to your courage and revel in your humor when displayed. Yes, they are all that matters. Huggadoos ~ john
Murray Avatar
December 12, 2016 at 2:01 PM
Thank you John.
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 11, 2016 at 6:57 AM
Children are everything. I love your poem Jean! 7 ; )
Murray Avatar
December 11, 2016 at 9:48 AM
Thank you Connie.
James Avatar
December 11, 2016 at 3:43 AM
The Greeks called it Storge love...a type of Philia love..the longest lasting of all love..that of parent and child! lovely read!
Murray Avatar
December 11, 2016 at 9:46 AM
All I want is a hunk a hunk of burning love James.
Smith Avatar
December 10, 2016 at 3:10 PM
You did a great job Jean...wonderful acrostic
Murray Avatar
December 10, 2016 at 3:57 PM
Hi Tim. I originally did one in free verse but decided to keep it short and sweet. I know you also are madly in love with your daughters. They make it all worthwhile for me. I'm sure you agree.
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