Heidi Sands Poet Rhyme

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Countryside

*Inspired by photo


Layers of mountains hold stories untold
The golden sunset begins to unfold
Answers are so far away,
from contemplation at the end of the day
Dots of orange flowers look forward on the hill
I must have missed it, while I was sitting still
It is here, where I needed to be
In the silence of the countryside, welcoming me


Heidi Sands

10/7/25

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Darlene De Beaulieu November 25, 2025 at 3:03 PM Hello Heidi, yes some of us need the countryside to welcome us. some need the sound of the river with waves to welcome us.some of us neeed the mountais to be welcomed. Hugs /Darlene/ Darlene De Beaulieu November 26, 2025 at 9:46 AM Hello Heidi, for me it would be the sound of the waves rushing to shore. i find this sound peacwful. Hugs. /Darlene/ Heidi Sands November 25, 2025 at 3:12 PM Yes. That is true Darlene. Thank you for your comment. Hugs :)

Paula Goldsmith October 14, 2025 at 11:37 AM Another one I just found. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Countryside" write with a pretty picture. I Love it.... Hugs... Have a blessed day writing away.............. Heidi Sands October 14, 2025 at 1:27 PM Thank you so much Paula. I appreciate your kind comments. Have fun writing away! :)

Dr. Vandana Sharma October 9, 2025 at 7:32 AM A place of peace, that's what we all need :) Heidi Sands October 9, 2025 at 8:36 AM Thank you Dr Vandana :)

Victor Buhagiar October 9, 2025 at 2:01 AM Great emotions and imagery in this poem. Well done. Heidi Sands October 9, 2025 at 5:57 AM Thank you very much Victor. I hope you have a nice day :)

Frank Sheehan October 8, 2025 at 12:55 PM Wonderful write. Nice rhymes, rhythm and flow. Great imagery. Heidi Sands October 8, 2025 at 1:12 PM Thanks so much Frank. I appreciate your feedback :)

Daisy Meadows October 8, 2025 at 8:29 AM A lovely poem. Well done. Heidi Sands October 8, 2025 at 9:07 AM Thank you very much Daisy :)

Daniel Henry Rodgers October 8, 2025 at 7:35 AM Dear Heidi, Oh, arriving somewhere inside yourself after missing what was right in front of you. Amen! I love how the poem doesn’t rush. It sits still, like you did, and lets the quiet do the talking. Autumn Blessings, Dear Heidi, Daniel Heidi Sands October 8, 2025 at 9:07 AM Thank you very much Daniel. Autumn Blessings :)

James Marshall Goff October 7, 2025 at 10:17 PM Hi Heidi, sometimes we find moments connecting us with mother earth, your creative poetry has gifted us with such a moment, thanks! Heidi Sands October 8, 2025 at 4:03 AM Thank you James. I appreciate your conmenrt :)

Heidi Sands October 7, 2025 at 1:17 PM Submitted 10/7/25