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Country Side

Country side... lightning flashes bring down rain. strong wind blows fruits and leaves falling... cyclone speaks. Category:gyooji season:aki

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 11/28/2011 3:48:00 PM
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Aro one thing that I can see which held you back is the use of capitals & periods, one reason a haiku does not use periods is that the intent is for it too be only a moments insight..not a complete thought or a complete story...poets wrote haiku before and after anothers writes many time in long, long strings of verse. Also, you have the cyclone speaking this is in your mind that the roar sounds like speech to you..you are making a judgement try to stay factual OBJECTIVE...Congrad's & SOUP Mail
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Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 11/28/2011 10:50:00 AM
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Congratulations on your win in Charles' "Short Short Haiku" contest Olusegun. Love, Carol
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Gwendolen Song
Date: 11/27/2011 10:43:00 PM
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Hi Olusequn...I like how the cyclone got everyone's attention at the end of your double haiku. Very nice use of alliteration, friend. It spoke volumes to me. Gwendolen
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Joseph Osita
Date: 11/26/2011 3:19:00 PM
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Many Congrats on your top placement,bro. Do have a wonderful day
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David Williams
Date: 11/26/2011 12:13:00 PM
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olusegun congrats on your win..David
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Kabuteng P.Ink K.
Date: 11/26/2011 11:41:00 AM
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You sure have some vivid images here, Olusegun. Super congrats on your win!
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Kash Poet
Date: 11/26/2011 8:21:00 AM
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Beautiful haiku here Olusegun!Congratulations on your win.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/25/2011 11:45:00 PM
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Happy to see you on the winners' list, Olusegun. Congratulations to you!
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 11/25/2011 4:53:00 PM
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Your last line in last haiku wraps it up eloquently with vivid imagery. Congratulations on your win.
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