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Counting Stars

Counting Stars! I see the moon and the stars, Glowing bright and scattered apart. I count em one to some numbers And mean while I get your thoughts. I get your thoughts that you too be looking at em, May be counting or just wondering at them. Or may be the ?? Moon wondering on you That without you here Stars are few. So do you go out in the night, Under the sky when no there's no City light. And say hi to the Moon and to the stars, Cos I miss the count as the moon shows your flash. ~Ashok Kumar Mishra

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/5/2018 9:34:00 PM
There is a star for each of us Ashok...Very nice poem...All the best...Charlie
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Ashok Kumar Mishra
Date: 5/5/2018 11:41:00 PM
Thank you Charlie, for your recognition ~Ashok
Date: 5/2/2018 6:50:00 AM
We all look at the same moon and stars and wonder...very romantically cool.
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Ashok Kumar Mishra
Date: 5/2/2018 7:44:00 AM
Thank you Phil ... :) :)
Date: 4/3/2018 6:44:00 AM
Lovely ! Say hi to the moon & stars. :))
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Ashok Kumar Mishra
Date: 4/3/2018 10:33:00 AM
Yeah, you keep on saying hi to The Moon and The Stars..... And I'll give you count everyday :) Thank you so much for your appreciation :) :) <3
Date: 3/30/2018 12:15:00 AM
Oh i love the stars..staring, counting, shape forming ??
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Ashok Kumar Mishra
Date: 3/30/2018 12:39:00 AM
Yes, starring, counting and shape forming..... Moon centered and the semi transparent clouds, floating below clean sky, I take them as my colours of canvas of starry night.... Ha ha... I'm glad you loved it too :) thank you Charmane :)
Date: 3/29/2018 7:25:00 AM
- The starry sky is beautiful and romantic ... a lovely poem, Ashok :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Ashok Kumar Mishra
Date: 3/29/2018 9:36:00 AM
Thank you so much Anne- Lise/ Sunshine Smile :) :) :)
Date: 3/22/2018 4:22:00 AM
I honor your simplicity on 'Counting Stars'
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Ashok Kumar Mishra
Date: 3/22/2018 4:26:00 AM
Thank you very much Martins. I'm honored as you liked it. :)
Date: 3/16/2018 8:29:00 PM
Lovely Thought!
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Ashok Kumar Mishra
Date: 3/17/2018 12:22:00 AM
Thank you very much Sakshi!!!! <3

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