Ashok Kumar Mishra Poet Rhyme

Counting Stars

Counting Stars!

I see the moon and the stars,
Glowing bright and scattered apart.
I count em one to some numbers
And mean while I get your thoughts.

I get your thoughts that you too be looking at em,
May be counting or just wondering at  them.
Or may be the ?? Moon wondering on you
That without you here Stars are few.

So do you go out in the night,
Under the sky when no there's no City light.
And say hi to the Moon and to the stars,
Cos I miss the count as the moon shows your flash.

~Ashok Kumar Mishra

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Charles Messina May 5, 2018 at 9:34 PM There is a star for each of us Ashok...Very nice poem...All the best...Charlie Ashok Kumar Mishra May 5, 2018 at 11:41 PM Thank you Charlie, for your recognition ~Ashok

Phil Capitano May 2, 2018 at 6:50 AM We all look at the same moon and stars and wonder...very romantically cool. Ashok Kumar Mishra May 2, 2018 at 7:44 AM Thank you Phil ... :) :)

Patricia Leduc April 3, 2018 at 6:44 AM Lovely ! Say hi to the moon & stars. :)) Ashok Kumar Mishra April 3, 2018 at 10:33 AM Yeah, you keep on saying hi to The Moon and The Stars..... And I'll give you count everyday :) Thank you so much for your appreciation :) :) <3

Charmane Bellen March 30, 2018 at 12:15 AM Oh i love the stars..staring, counting, shape forming ?? Ashok Kumar Mishra March 30, 2018 at 12:39 AM Yes, starring, counting and shape forming..... Moon centered and the semi transparent clouds, floating below clean sky, I take them as my colours of canvas of starry night.... Ha ha... I'm glad you loved it too :) thank you Charmane :)

Anne-Lise Andresen March 29, 2018 at 7:25 AM - The starry sky is beautiful and romantic ... a lovely poem, Ashok :) - // Anne-Lise :) Ashok Kumar Mishra March 29, 2018 at 9:36 AM Thank you so much Anne- Lise/ Sunshine Smile :) :) :)

Martins Deep March 22, 2018 at 4:22 AM I honor your simplicity on 'Counting Stars' Ashok Kumar Mishra March 22, 2018 at 4:26 AM Thank you very much Martins. I'm honored as you liked it. :)

Sakshi Singh March 16, 2018 at 8:29 PM Lovely Thought! Ashok Kumar Mishra March 17, 2018 at 12:22 AM Thank you very much Sakshi!!!! <3