Counting Sheep

When counting sheep on sleepless nights
   fails to make me sleep
 I count the stars  in vaulted heights
   that through my window peep

    Then  lullabies from up on high
  bring my soul to rest
     In dreams I fly across the sky
  in slumber's peaceful quest
                  ----
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Mishra Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 3:18 AM
Love this soothing muse Joseph. Congratulations on your win :)
Devonshire Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 1:58 PM
Joseph, this would have placed higher if not for the grammar. Should be counting fails in the first verse and lullabies bring in the second. Congrats on your placement.
May Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 2:29 PM
Thank you for my placement Carolyn, sorry about the grammar misses
Allison Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 1:56 PM
lovely to read this gem again, many congrats Joseph:-) hugs jan xx
Marc Avatar
October 26, 2019 at 9:33 AM
Nicely penned ~ "I count the stars in vaulted heights"
Dietrich Avatar
May 31, 2017 at 3:26 PM
Love it. Congrats in the rhyming contest!(another win for this one)
Haight Avatar
May 30, 2017 at 2:07 PM
Very calm and relaxing thoughts expressed in your rhyme, Joseph. Congratulations on your fine win. Sandra
Canerdy Avatar
May 30, 2017 at 9:11 AM
Joseph, this is sweet and lovely! Congrats on your win! Janice
Michelle Avatar
May 30, 2017 at 8:46 AM
Congrats on your placement in my rhyme battle contest, Joseph! This was excellent :) Love, Juli-Michelle
May Avatar
May 30, 2017 at 11:21 AM
Thank you for my placement Juli
Merryman Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 4:04 PM
I like this Joseph! It's simple and soothing. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
A  Avatar
November 10, 2015 at 12:01 PM
Congrats. SK
Allison Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 3:33 PM
so beautifully penned Joseph congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
A  Avatar
January 28, 2014 at 3:19 PM
JOSEPH, CONGRAT, in the any poem goes contest. Have yourself a nice sunny day....... SKAT
Mehta Avatar
January 5, 2014 at 2:56 AM
Very interesting and unique write, congrats on the win, Joseph
A   Avatar
January 3, 2014 at 9:37 PM
Joseph, , Congratulations, thank you for supporting my contest and I. Stop by and read my latest when you have time, I will miss you:( have yourself an awesome 2014.. Always~ LINDA"
May Avatar
January 3, 2014 at 10:44 PM
I will miss you too Linda...If you should change your mind your crown awaits you, for the beauty in your heart and the beauty of your poetry...HUGS
Lamoureux Avatar
July 23, 2013 at 8:06 AM
A happy ending, congratulations
Gasun Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 10:15 PM
My huge heartfelt congratulations on your great win my dear friend, Joseph.It’s an outstanding poem indeed which really deserved its shining win. Thank you so much for giving me your precious gem in my contest and for your support. Love lots and big hugs, Leonora
May Avatar
July 23, 2013 at 7:03 AM
Thank you for my placement in your contest Leonora....hugs
Gabriella Avatar
July 11, 2013 at 5:28 PM
Oh another lovely piece from you! I'm putting this in my favorites this. I love it!
May Avatar
July 11, 2013 at 5:48 PM
thank you for faving my poem April
Haick Avatar
July 4, 2013 at 8:42 PM
Beautifully written, Joseph! This is one for my Fav. List! Love it! Always, Annalise
May Avatar
July 5, 2013 at 2:54 PM
thanks for faving my poem Annalise
Babcock Avatar
July 4, 2013 at 4:00 PM
Hate those sleepless nights that you toss and turn all night. Cute poem you have penned. love phyl
May Avatar
July 5, 2013 at 2:53 PM
thank you Phyllis
Dietrich Avatar
July 4, 2013 at 9:55 AM
Hey, yours is almost like a triolet. I did a triolet for mine but have not posted it yet. I really like how you did the theme!
May Avatar
July 5, 2013 at 2:52 PM
thank you Andrea
A  Avatar
July 4, 2013 at 12:32 AM
"tremendously awesome!!! SKAT"
May Avatar
July 5, 2013 at 2:51 PM
thank you Skat
Kendrick Avatar
July 3, 2013 at 8:43 AM
Ahh!! This one brings a feeling of relaxation and comfort..Enjoyed reading it this morn..Thanks for your visit to my work..Sara
May Avatar
July 5, 2013 at 2:51 PM
thank you Sara
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