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5 - I try to rise above 4 - I think I see your love 3 - I feel it pull me down 2 - I lower my head and frown 1 - I don't want to drown

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Date: 2/12/2016 11:38:00 PM
JEREMY, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Book: Shattered Sighs