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Countdown To the Last 1 On My List

Digits can be numbers, and our numbers mean a lot! But digits I rate highest are the digits that I’ve got: those literally a part of me; the five upon each hand comprise my top ten digits, and here’s what makes them grand: Without my top ten digits, there’s little I could do. I couldn’t write, or cook or clean, or even tie a shoe. Inflexible, I couldn’t use my toes to reach my lips, And so I’d need somebody’s help to eat my fish and chips! Each finger serves a purpose and I’ve got it figured out. The one most useful to me is the one that is most stout. The thumb, which can be overlooked, is really very strong. Just try to hold a pen and write. Without it, you will long to feel that writing instrument guided by your thumb. But using just the thumb alone can prove quite cumbersome. Helping guide that pen, you need a finger that is sturdy. That would be the middle guy, also known as Birdie! Of course, because I’m so left-brained, my top ten digits are the ones attached to my right palm, and two I’ve named thus far. The index (or the pointer finger) I would rate at three. It’s a useful finger for a teacher just like me. Ring finger gets a four. Symbolizing love, it’s lesser value to me than the three discussed above. My number five on my right hand, and the weakest one, is Pinky. Little finger is the one that I most shun! The fingers on my other hand would finish out my list. The sixth important one, of course, is nearest to the wrist. My left hand’s middle finger is the next one, naturally, on my top ten countdown. Number seven it would be. Eight and nine are index and the ring, respectively. So the last 1 on my list I‘m sure by now you see is left hand’s pinky, number ten. And now I’ve named them all: Ten fingers, for I need both hands to catch a real fast ball! For the 'The Last 1' Poetry Contest of Anthony Biaanco

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Date: 2/24/2011 10:50:00 AM
amazing to think that how this idea of writing about fingers came to ur mind with the contest name 'top ten'!wonderful poem ,Andrea.---kash
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Date: 8/3/2010 12:51:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea on your win , creative n interesting, well done !
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Date: 7/27/2010 7:05:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea on your win in Joe Flach's contest "Top 10". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/25/2010 3:58:00 PM
Andrea, a cute and creative write. Thank you for sharing this with me through my contest. Joe
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Date: 7/24/2010 9:12:00 AM
Congrats Andrea on your HM in the Top Ten contest with this unique and original creative write.. enjoy another very special honor my friend.. with luv..
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Date: 7/24/2010 7:41:00 AM
Congrats, Andrea on your HM. I now look at my fingers differently! Excellent write. Kudos. You and yours have a truely great weekend. xxxRalph
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Date: 7/15/2010 8:19:00 PM
Constance wanted us to post it and keep adding lines as we went along so I accommodated her and this is the way we did the Mother and Father poems together... this should go pretty fast.. its a sad and sore subject for us both.. with luv..
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Date: 7/15/2010 3:22:00 PM
Textbook. Textbook in application as is usually thee case or a children's or Golden book as is should be the case. Seriously, read it. It would be perfect for that. I hope that you are not offended by that. I just got an angry soup mail from someone who swore I was insulting, but the risks we run with Art and ego and feelings and the power of perception. God! Good job. Regards, Gerard.
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Date: 7/14/2010 7:20:00 AM
My Foot Loose and Fancy Free is a story told from my baby son Joseph John's heart.. the contest brought back all kinds of memories to those days when he struggled with his lung respiratory problems.. and finally lost that battle.. he was a little fighter for five months.. there goes that five again.. Andrea..it follows me everywhere I go.. with luv.. will explain more later..
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Date: 7/13/2010 11:03:00 AM
Love it! Being an X professional violinist, I have always been vitally concerned with my fingers. Alas the pinky is the most troublesome because it's the weakest with poorest support. I try to alternate away from the pinky. I won't go into the rest, but wish I'd come up with something as clever as you have, dear Andrea. LOve, Dave
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Date: 7/13/2010 10:55:00 AM
Hi Andrea. Was reading in your blog about Joyce that you are in Utah. What part? My son, his wife, 5 children and 10 grand children live in the Ogden area. Actually South Weber. Not important, just curious that's all. I love Utah. Usually go there in Sep for a visit. I'm in Newburgh, NY. Have a good one. Ralph
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Date: 7/13/2010 10:09:00 AM
This was so amazing, a simple thought converted into a epic write that I feel only you could have pulled off honestly! Very Impressed
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Date: 7/13/2010 7:22:00 AM
Excellent write, Andrea! Wish you best of luck in the contest and thank you for your ongouing comments I do appreciate!...Have a great time!...Love, Gert
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Date: 7/13/2010 6:56:00 AM
A beautiful read. Also thank you for your kind words on my latest if you have time please check out my saga, criminal part 3- ofcourse its not true just a story. Have a great day.
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Date: 7/13/2010 5:40:00 AM
A most excellent write Andrea, the meter, premise and rhymes are all top shelf! The poem itself is very entertaining for me, it brought smiles and laughter to this old soul this morning. Good luck on the contest, I'm confident it will place.
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Date: 7/12/2010 10:15:00 PM
you sure are witty thinking of your fingers-- I also can't decide on which top 10 to do!! this better win! and oops? I don't think I know what song you were referring to?
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Date: 7/12/2010 7:53:00 PM
BRAVO Andrea.. I see a first place crown on this one for sure .. what a dynamic write for the top ten.. awesome .. and invigorating too.. good luck though u won't need luck ..just your dancing shoes to sachette to the winners circle.. with luv..
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Date: 7/12/2010 5:43:00 PM
Your writing is exquistite and no wonder you're one of my favs. Have a great day! Scarlett
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Date: 7/12/2010 5:23:00 AM
Wow Andrea, you never seize to amaze me with your ideas for the contests.. I love this one, best wishes for the contest, Luv Wilma
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Date: 7/12/2010 2:45:00 AM
Wow, Andrea,I've been racking my brains what to write for this contest and you came up with something so cool-- haha i never even thought of my own fingers!! So cool how you rate each finger-- I think I'd probably rate my thumb and pointer fingers high too ;) & haha yeah poor pinky would be last for me too-- all it does is cry wee wee wee all the way home! lol... This unique write should do well in the contest :) btw did you read my email? hugs--nikko :)
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Date: 7/11/2010 10:52:00 PM
I love your original,sweet work dear one of'top ten 'friends.I appreciate my fingers more now :). .and hope to find more time to use my writing fingertips and read you more,Celeste..Celene..Cuchi. .whatever,What's in a name,lol,hugs C
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Date: 7/11/2010 7:38:00 PM
A nice write on top ten. Good luck in the contest
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Date: 7/11/2010 6:43:00 PM
Yes I value my digits as well-Almost lost my thumb in my dally once, sure glad I didn't! Good Luck in the Contest Andrea!~Tirzah~
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Date: 7/11/2010 6:27:00 PM
informative and interesting !
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Date: 7/11/2010 3:39:00 PM
Good luck in the contest..Sara
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