countdown hiku
For Sir Brian Strand's 1403 Poetry Contest
5 August 2025
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| | engines rumble low—
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|_||_| the silence counts down to flame,
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/ || \ a dream leaves the Earth.
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Copyright © Bernard F. Asuncion | Year Posted 2025
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