Count Your Blessings

18 months ago he married
late
the love of his life 
and in january a child was born
a cough he couldn't cure
was lung cancer
3 months later he is dead
dead
gone to the child to the woman
gone to his mother, his brothers
and all who loved him
life is short
chances are few
count your blessings
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Chircop Avatar
August 27, 2009 at 11:46 PM
ow my this made me heart break..yes life is short and we must go to the ones we love and all..good advice--excellent--charma
Nash Avatar
August 27, 2009 at 9:00 PM
In fact, I think you've just inspired a new poem/song for me to write. So thank you 2x haha!
Nash Avatar
August 27, 2009 at 8:59 PM
Count your blessings indeed... I know I can forget to do that often, it's good to remind us every once in a while. Thank you :)
Golden Avatar
August 27, 2009 at 8:34 PM
Yes, we should count them every day, for the day we are in is all we have. Thanks for this, Veronica. Hugs, Donna
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