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one white mouse runs out of a hole, two black mice run up a pole, raven caw caws from a tree, she says one and two make three, mother mouse is at the door, she takes the mouse count to four, here comes big mouse daddy Clive, he is fattest of the five, aunt mousy now joins the mix, her tail is longest of the six, "caw caw" screams the black raven, grandpa mouse makes it seven!” grandma walks in at number eight, Raven says "too many to fight" "There are two more mice in the house, Number nine and number ten mouse!" Raven says as she flies away, "I shall get you some other day!!"
Written 19/04/2021 Nursery rhyme(5) contest Eve Roper sponsored Syllables 7 but some lines have 8 syllables to maintain grammatical correctness as it is aimed at children. This poem has been written to teach, counting simple additions and opposites and members in a family.

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Date: 4/24/2021 8:48:00 AM
A nice counting rhyme, Krish! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 4/24/2021 8:58:00 AM
Thanks Kim! A bit too long, perhaps but hope children like it.:)
Date: 4/23/2021 2:21:00 PM
Oh I do like this one so much Krish, so well penned - congratulations on your win. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 4/23/2021 8:16:00 PM
Thanks Jennifer! I loved your goat poem too!! Much appreciate your kind visit!
Date: 4/23/2021 6:57:00 AM
Great poem, Krish, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 4/23/2021 9:38:00 AM
Thanks Eve! Got carried away! shall make it shorter next time!:)
Date: 4/21/2021 12:43:00 AM
Ha... Cute one Krishji... sweet nursery rhyme... God bless.. ~ Ani
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Date: 4/21/2021 10:57:00 AM
Thanks Ani. Happy to see your comments! Hope all is well in India where you are.

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