Count Dracula Acrostic

Coffin is where this creepy fellow sleeps
Other people’s blood he likes to drink
Unique teeth – shiny pointed fangs
Naked necks are his tasty midnight snack
Transylvania is his homeland, its soil gives him strength

Darkness is his only friend he works undercover of the night
Real name is Count Vladislaus Dracula
Always avoids eating garlic in his food
Cannot abide a sunny day
Unless he has a wooden stake through his heart he cannot die
Loves to shapeshift into a bat, wolf, dog or fog
Alucard is his name backwards beware he’s cunningly disguised

Jan Allison
29th March 2014

Written for contest ‘Be Bram Stoker for a day’
Sponsored by Darren Watson
~ Awarded 3rd place ~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Nance Avatar
August 22, 2014 at 6:25 PM
I'm having a back in time day, going through old poems and reading stuff I haven't read yet and I like this! Acrostics are so much fun, got a kick outta your A at the end. :) hugs :)
Allison Avatar
August 22, 2014 at 6:28 PM
I was gobsmacked when i won 3rd prize with this one Casarah it was probably one of my first attempts at the acrostic form:-) Hugs jan xxx
Halliday Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 1:52 PM
Yes, I did like your Dracula acrostic. Thanks for commenting on my haiku
Allison Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 1:55 PM
Thanks Mark for dropping by. Hugs Jan x
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
April 16, 2014 at 5:30 AM
Excellent xx
Allison Avatar
April 16, 2014 at 5:36 AM
Thanks for the lovely comment. Hugs Jan x
Dietrich Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 6:23 PM
YOu made really good work of the acrostic form for your Dracula form. WAY to GO!!! Congrats.
Allison Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 6:31 PM
Thanks Andrea for the lovely comment. Hugs Jan x
Richards Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 10:09 AM
Using the acrostic form is never easy......but this was the perfect format to spell out our dark side!!! I love it !! Well done, Jan......you nailed it (with a stake!! lol)
Allison Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 11:44 AM
Thank you so much for the lovely comments Carrie. I only started posting in February and its about my 4th attempt at an acrostic am delighted with the result. Hugs Jan x
Mehta Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 7:52 AM
Feeling like Bram Stoker is alive. Congrats on the win, jan
Allison Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 8:04 AM
Thanks for the lovely comment Dr Mehta. Jan x
Dom Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 6:02 AM
A very clever write. Cheers on your win!
Allison Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 7:12 AM
Thanks Michael am still in shock from the placing. hugs Jan x
Callus Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 2:39 AM
Well executed Dracula acrostic.....merited a podium finish!! congratulations Jan :) // paul
Allison Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 4:28 AM
I knew nothing of the win until I read Verlenas post this morning - am totally blown away with my placing. Hugs Jan xxx
Walker  Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 10:17 PM
Nice Jane... congratulations on your win... Verlena
Allison Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 10:20 PM
Wow this is news to me Verlena - thanks! Hugs Jan xxxx
Ellison Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 11:01 AM
You is my kind of writer... always a treat reading your stuff! Definitely separated at birth, my dear sis! Loved it as with all your "stuff"! XOXOX
Allison Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 11:35 AM
Thanks Jack have seen some superb entries to Darren's contest I just write for the sheer fun and hope for the best. Hugs Jan xxx
Sivey Avatar
March 29, 2014 at 5:56 AM
I really enjoyed reading this fabulous poem my friend! This is a lovely write, such a wondrous piece! What a glorious poem, Great Work!! I just love a good vampire poem, one of my favorite Halloween creatures, their strength is astounding, many times regular human strength!
Allison Avatar
March 29, 2014 at 5:59 AM
Oh Russell I am blown away by your lovely comments thank you so much! Do enter Darren's contest I am sure you will write an awesome poem with your knowledge. Hugs Jan xxxx
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