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He' attired in magnificient apron
smiled to me
his.or mine eyes told
" hey ! i'm here"

Looked elegant without 
anxiety or can I say fear
instead of anxiety

He has some sort of 
FRAGRANCE

I gave up everything to be with you

MY OWN DESTINY
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Khan Avatar
August 24, 2012 at 11:35 AM
try to develop rhyme.good now proceed saroj khan[sakha] india
Priya Avatar
August 19, 2012 at 1:24 AM
WELCUM maya....hv a gud tym here in poetry soup!!!
Brown Avatar
August 9, 2012 at 5:52 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Maya. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
Devika Avatar
August 13, 2012 at 7:23 AM
Thank you Carol
Braithwaite Avatar
August 8, 2012 at 1:08 PM
Very moving In line 3 maybe it should be "said" possibly
Devika Avatar
August 13, 2012 at 7:24 AM
Thank you for your valuable suggestion..
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