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He' attired in magnificient apron smiled to me his.or mine eyes told " hey ! i'm here" Looked elegant without anxiety or can I say fear instead of anxiety He has some sort of FRAGRANCE I gave up everything to be with you MY OWN DESTINY

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Date: 8/24/2012 11:35:00 AM
try to develop rhyme.good now proceed saroj khan[sakha] india
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Date: 8/19/2012 1:24:00 AM
WELCUM maya....hv a gud tym here in poetry soup!!!
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Date: 8/9/2012 5:52:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Maya. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Maya Devika
Date: 8/13/2012 7:23:00 AM
Thank you Carol
Date: 8/8/2012 1:08:00 PM
Very moving In line 3 maybe it should be "said" possibly
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Maya Devika
Date: 8/13/2012 7:24:00 AM
Thank you for your valuable suggestion..

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